Excellent poem with a great message oh and amazing flow
Take care
HS

I loved the flow of this one....Its a very real poem real feelings..and very true....thank you for sharing and thank you for your comments on my War-Lebannon..poem...It breaks my heart to no ends...watching the killing and the suffering....Save the Children from War....keep in touch

Yah, lke everyone said great flow!!! your profile says your thirteen?? wow get um girl