AWW!!!!!!!!! This was brilliant hun! Again you nearly brought me to tears. It was so beautiful, but it was also sad. I felt the emotion that you put into each word. I loved the last stanza that is the one that nearly over-whelmed me:

So as I write this
You're somewhere so far away
A place i can only reach
By loving you this way

This was really beautiful. You have a wonderful talent. Instant 5/5
Keep up the wonderful work hun

Letty

Wow. this is an amazing poem and i envy your talent. amazing job. 5/5!

by the way: i love your titles.

AWW how sweet..sad but sweet. You have a true talent. Great job 5/5

Aww... this is such a sad and heartfelt write. You wrote this so beautifully. The flow and rhythm was perfect and held up well and I just loved all of it. Your emotions were so pure and well spoken of. Great job on this! 5/5
((I had already commented on "Words Left Unheard", so I did this one instead. I hope you don't mind! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this though! Amazing write!))

This was so sweet i love the message i can relate at the same time.. well this is another great poem of urs just keep on writing

The concluding stanza was excellent. I had an extremely unusual flow to it with the rhyme scheme jumping around, but the messae was good and like I sad before, a terriffic conclusion!
Charisma*

I loved that, especially the ending; it seemed to round the whole thing off. Nice style of writing, too. =] 5/5.

Hey good work! i especially liked the 3rd stanza. the flow needs a little work but not much. the emotion in this poem is very convincing and the imagery is beautiful. 5/5 ~kayla~

Love sometimes turns out to be the exact opposite of what we think it will be. I really liked this poem the words spoken were so very true - amazing job 5/5

This is a very nice love poem!
you really do know how to write...
loved it... keep it up!

Omg wow I cant even begin to tell you how wonderful the poem is. It's simply amazing, people who have been through this kinda thing will definatly get it by the end of the poem I was full out crying :) Absolutly loved it

So sweet and beautiful...
You write very touching love poetry, realistic and filled with emotions and this piece is not an exception.
Truly great, from the beginning to the end.
I like your rhymes here a lot, you created excellent flow with them.

This had a lot of heart wrenching spots in it and the emotions were written very well the flow was a bit choppy but all and all a good read Plot121

Never read a more touching poems about lost love. Liked it very much, definitely one of my favorites. Again nothing bad to comment, just perfect 5/5

Damn!,,..that was totally hurts!..but i love this one=D..i really love your poems!...its really touch me.. BIG HUG!!..=)..i'm your 1 one fan!.=D

Wow, that was so beauiful and by far my favorite of all, I love how you poured out all your heart into this poem and how they were so strong, powerful, and meaningful, that they screamed out to my as I read each word, screamed how your feelings, and your soul, OUTSTANDING POEM, WONDERFUL JOB