This Fallen Angel

by Candice   Jul 28, 2006


I am an Angel fallen from heaven
Placed on the world's doorstep to let me in
Before I fell
I watched over all humans
I watched their cruel ways
Wondering how they could hate so much
I see wars over weapons
I see weapons kill others just like them
Why do they kill their own species?
If they only realized they are much the same
They only kill themselves
I'm afraid of this cruel world
I'm an Angel to give hope and realization
But I am only one and that is not enough

This is the first poem out of my genre so I hope it is good please give me some advice on how to improve thanks!

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  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    Excellent! I really enjoyed reading this poem 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    This is real;ly different writing than im used to reading on here, its a refreshing change
    keep writing, you really have a talent
    5/5 definetly

  • 18 years ago

    by BlackHeartRoses

    Very true the meanings between the words, I love it so! Keep up the good work Candice!
    ~Luv Seanie