Wah-Oh My.Pink.Glue.I loved it,yes the metaphors were a good idea, I thought. Yep, excellent. 5/5 Lubb you my lubber.

XxXCassie.LUBBS.YouXxX

Oh Ace poem, mate!! Mint, well Mint.
Tah tah Dearie. Loveing ya, you dame. =] 5/5
-Saphy-

Fantabulous, i love how you used the game of cards and used it as a huge metaphor. Great work!

Only in this stanza or verse or wtv people call em:

Ace of spades; your favourite card,
Darling, your poker face shows though.
Your favourite lie; used all of the time,
I’m growing impatient with your feeble bets.

Should it be 'though' or 'through'?
Once again, great work!

.X. Lizzzy .X.

This poem has a slightly saracstic tone to it. I very much enjoyed it. Because you used "Sweetheart" in this context it added bite and resentment. The metaphores were compelling and then the entire concept reminded me of a poem I wrote called cards. It was about someone cheating but I also used poker as a front. well done hunni, my absolute fav part:

Contradiction is the game tonight, sweetheart.
Put your lies down on the table.
Bet your poker face; and lay your cards down.
B u l l s h i t; let me scream that out for you.