Willow... please dont

The write a note saying this is because of you.

[Think you meant 'Then' instead of 'The']

I should disappear from this world,
Because apparently I regularly "go off the rails".
A lot of people think I should be on medication,
Because of all my fails.

[I think you should change one of the 'becauses' ..It felt abit off with having both there. You also used alot of I, I, I, I ..Try not avoid doing that. =)]

I'm slowly getting better,
But then someone says I still want to kill myself.
I've told this person I never want to do that,
But now this comment has made me think again about killing myself.

[I can relate to that stanza, I liked it.]

I went through a thing where my mind told me I should die,
But now I'm over it.
That one comment brings those feelings back,
But I will continue to fight and I have one friend who'll give her bit.

[I thought that stanza was really inspiring, I'm glad you're gonna fight!]

The blood actual ran down my arm,

[actually, not actual]

Thought the ending was strong, and sad. An emotional write. Keep it up, and smile.

Natalie``

Wow i kno exactly how u feel. ppl think of me as a certain way and then it just makes me even more sad and yea.. this is a great poem. i love it. its filled with emotions and everything. ur a great writer.. thank you for ur comments they mean so so much to me. keep on writing.
take care
luve angie

Great poem I kno how you feel
just keep on keeping on