That was a good poem! but try not to use cappital letters in the middle of the word,,, cos it gets harder to read,,, but it was a good poem!

It was a good poem.
But try not to use cpital letters in the middle!
It makes it harder to read and doesnt look good in poetry.
And yeah dont use numbers instead of words. But otherwise it was very good!!

TORM

Agreed with the above comments, ThIS is rEAllY DiStRAcTIng! It takes all the feeling away from the poem, as the reader is so distracted and unpleased because instead of enjoying the poem the now have to decipher the meaning and message! Also NO NUMBERS and NO SLANG yur=you're yuh=you (I think), to me it's as if you are trying to be a gangsta or something lol and it really makes the poem lose credibility! I would have probably given this a 3 although the poem is so well written it's worthy of a 5 but i cant rate it so because of what i've mentioned! But congrats on a good poem!