Summer Heat [acrostic]

by Tainted Beauty   Jul 28, 2006


Stifling heat keeps the windows and doors closed,
Unusually quiet, the neighborhood seems deserted,
Maybe the sun beating down is too much to handle,
My vision is clouded by the beads of sweat
Even with the fan going, the heat is killing me as I
Remember the cool spring days,

Hearing the weather forecast,
Enrages me, more stifling temperatures for the days
Ahead, I can only think of one thing to do,
Tanning seems the only reasonable option

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  • 18 years ago

    by courtney

    Cute poem shows u takeing something bad and makeing it a good thing
    ~courtney~

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good, though I suggest using less fill words.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I actually felt the summer heat. =)
    The descriptions were good and appropiate. I liked them because they were original and they were important to describe the summer heat.

    Good job!

    Keep writing.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I love this poem.

    "Hearing the weather forecast,
    Enrages me, more stifling temperatures for the days
    Ahead, I can only think of one thing to do,
    Tanning seems the only reasonable option "

    I loved that stanza I thought it was cute. I have to agree with the poem though; it has been so hot out. Anyway..Great Job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Lol!! That is so funny.. tee hee hee.... I love the way it is so sincere and then the last line just made me laugh so much! Well done it's very unique! 5/5
    - Polly

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