I like this poem I especially like the last line I found it funny. Your poem stayed to the subject and kept it's flow.:)

Steph --
Hey! I think this was great -- i`ve always liked acrostic poems. the flow worked out really well -- keep it up! wonderful job. 5/5
Thanks so much for commenting on my new poem! I`ll take everyone`s advice into consideration ;; so thanks for your thoughts!!

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Ah, tanning. I remember in summer, that's all I was doing, it gets so hot where I live. Lol. But it's winter now, so I'm pretty happy, haha.

It was a great poem steph. Very different and hot. Tehe. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

This is an okay poem.. It didn't seem to have a good flow to me, and I didn't feel the topic... Does that make sense to you?

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I liked this a lot I don't read much nature poems but the ones i have read are really unique..your imagery was great and the flow was good! great job 5/5

This was good

Lol!! That is so funny.. tee hee hee.... I love the way it is so sincere and then the last line just made me laugh so much! Well done it's very unique! 5/5
- Polly

I love this poem.

"Hearing the weather forecast,
Enrages me, more stifling temperatures for the days
Ahead, I can only think of one thing to do,
Tanning seems the only reasonable option "

I loved that stanza I thought it was cute. I have to agree with the poem though; it has been so hot out. Anyway..Great Job.

I actually felt the summer heat. =)
The descriptions were good and appropiate. I liked them because they were original and they were important to describe the summer heat.

Good job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Pretty good, though I suggest using less fill words.

Cute poem shows u takeing something bad and makeing it a good thing
~courtney~