I am done

by Nelle   Jul 28, 2006


I am done trying to make it work with you
I am done trying to make us be
I am done trying to be here for you
I am done trying to be good to you
I am done trying to help you
I am done trying to love you
I am done trying to give you hugs
I am done trying to make you smile
I am done trying to make your life worthwhile
I am done trying to be the best I can be
I am done trying to be anything with you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    You got to the point and I liked that. I remember writing something like this when I first started writing, but it went "I'm sorry...blah blah blah" ..but I think I deleted it ages ago. I loved this though, T'was angry and sad, and had so much emotion in it. Keep it up, and smile. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Lacey Rose

    Nelle hun it dont deserve u n yeah idk babe i love u soo much i would never wanna lose u

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥SeRioUsLy DyinG♥

    I ToTaLLy LoVe uR PoeM....patti

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Ooh feel the hate. You certainly get your point across. Although there is a lot of repeatition it works well and is just long enough not to become tedious.
    Great job as ever.

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