Ooh feel the hate. You certainly get your point across. Although there is a lot of repeatition it works well and is just long enough not to become tedious.
Great job as ever.

I ToTaLLy LoVe uR PoeM....patti

Nelle hun it dont deserve u n yeah idk babe i love u soo much i would never wanna lose u

You got to the point and I liked that. I remember writing something like this when I first started writing, but it went "I'm sorry...blah blah blah" ..but I think I deleted it ages ago. I loved this though, T'was angry and sad, and had so much emotion in it. Keep it up, and smile. 5/5

Natalie``