Aww. that was very sweet! i loved the last stanza, the last line was very moving.. this poem was quite random but i liked that.. lovely job! 5/5 p.s. nice to see you again :)

"for as long as there is water to dream on." oh! i like that very much

"for as long as there is
water to dream on. "

That line gave me chills. The entire piece is beautifully reminescent, but you just blew me away with that last line.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow i like this a lot. It is very original. I didn't quite understand the last line actually... hmm... But great work anyway and take care
Polly

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