Liked!! but thought it was a bit long, n had no rythm/ryme! but thats just me!!! 5/5

Heyy...i liked this peom... even though it was really sad, although it didnt have any rhyming words i liked it coz' it was different from all the others, keep writting. please comment on some of mine.. thanks.. Kirsty Palmer xxx

WOW... this one was very very sad! I liked it tho... the different style of rhyming was very good!!!
Loved it!!!
5/5

TORM