Love it nice job.

Loved reading it.. very well written keep it up.. please read and comment on some of mine.. thank you .. kirsty palmer xxx

OO i think i kno whts or who its about! LOL! Very very very good. I like how you used some metaphors which i think is wht makes a poem or song so good. BTW thnks for commenting on my trillion songs lol!

Plese go to the chat room! i need to talk to u!

I NEED MY HIPPY DESPERATLY LOL!