Ok I'm going to be honest with you...it's not a very good poem at all, but its really really sweet. If you want to improve you can start working on a better flow, putting it in even stanzas and rhyming always makes a poem better. Keep Writing!
-Shannon-

It waz great, teh rhyime thing, dont really work, this way it comes from the heart no just some cheesey line 4 it 2 rhyme, great poem!

It waz great, teh rhyime thing, dont really work, this way it comes from the heart no just some cheesey line 4 it 2 rhyme, great poem!

OMG!! This is so great! I can really relate to it! There's a guy that I feel like that about! But we're bf's so it would rin our "friend relationship"! LOL!
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{*LACEY*}

I really like your poems....i think i like it b/c i can relate right now....guys SUCK!!!!!

This is excelent

Amazing poem...mainly cuz it came 4m da heart..hope ur over him sweety...cuz im goin thru da same thing..anyways keep up da gud wrk..*thumps up*