I freeze

by Jenn   Jul 28, 2006


I freeze,
every time I look into deep crevasses of light hazel.
My blood pressure rises along with the rate of my fast pumping heart.
My mind shuts off, and I forget everything I was going to say.
I look at you, and my eyes swell up with rich cool tears.
And that’s when I realized, not a star in heaven was out of place tonight, and not a breath was to short.
And all this was because you told me you loved me

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  • 18 years ago

    by crazyandsweet

    Aww very sweet poem, I like it ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Aww this is such a sweet poem, and i loved the line that went *not a star in heaven was out of place tonight, and not a breath was to short* thats so cute! really good peice of writting, keep it up.. please read and comment on some of mine.. Kirsty Palmer xx