by Sophie Jul 29, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
love is
First glance |
by Jessica
Aww, that was cute and sad at the same time.. The flow was good, the descriptions you used were short but described it well, and the emotion was clear..Nice job hunny! 5/5 |
Awwah this is at first realy sweet and lovely, and then you added a great twist (that was really well done lol) and turned it into sadness and hate... very good, great write! kirsty xx |