Good job, awsome word choice but make sure that they relate to each other, make suere that they sound good together

all in all awsome, keep it up!

Bri

A strong poem but indeed meaning. Your poems are great and I really look up to you to make my poems great like yours. great job.

OMG, what can I say??? This is just beautiful written!!

And she doesn't want to talk about it,

[I think take off the 'and' ..I don't think it really needs to be there.]

I really liked what this poem was about, cause I can relate, But I didn't think nearly all the lines should start with "she's" ...and then only a couple don't. Keep it up!

Natalie``

I can so relate to this... i kno how u feel. wow i love this poem. i like the flow and eveyrthing about this poem. its so good. great job this is an amazing poem. keep it up 5/5
take care
angie

XDarkSuicidex --
I think that overall, you did an alright job here. The flow and the rhyming seemed kind of forced ;; and it was somewhat unsteady. I would suggest revising this, but re-reading it first. Try evaluating your work yourself ;; I do it all the time! It really helps boost the ratings in the poem, because you can read EXACTLY what someone else is reading. Nice job, though. 4/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

WOW---This is such a short poem, but holds so much emotion and the way you worded everything makes the poem so powerful--- Great write! I love it--

5/5 Keep it up-Your dark poems are my favorite =-)

Ok...that was interesting i liked it....like i said ur very good.....

These feelings surpress her,
Until she's got no more,
I have often felt the same..

You can really feel the emotion in this poem...it is very well written.