Every0ne 0f y0ur p0ems amazes me with y0ur great talent, this is a beautiful p0em!! cant wait t0 see m0re 0f them
l0ve maddy x0ox

3/5. I would have given you more, but remember that when you break a line it's almost like putting in a period or a comma, so it kinda ruins the flow. Otherwise, nice job

Ooo...short but it has depth lol. I like how you explained exactly how you felt. It looked simple, yet the emotions in it are most likely complicated. Great write! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Man...lately I've been coming across poems that my favorite part is the title...very eye catchy title it made me want to read right away! I thought you did an awesome job with this!
_Krissey

Awhhh. That is so sweeet. I loved it. Very nicely done yet again, you don't fail to suprise me. =]

As other people have said, it's a cute poem with a great theme.
"A stranger will give me
That much happiness?"

^This line is kinda true actually.

As for any improvements, I do have some, but I believe with time you'll improve just by reading other people's poems and experimenting.

You've proven me right once again.
your just amazing. Your girlfriend is
very lucky, that is, if thats the princess
your talking about. I wish you nothing
but success on your excellent jorney
into the world of the famous poets.
lol...Keep it up and you'll have girls
from every where knocking down your
door to listen to you read your poetry.

Love ya
Letty

Awsome, good as ever good story in it

I felt just like that when I got with my gf.. She lives in Florida and I live in the UK.. It is so hard to understand how You can feel so strongly for someone You have never met..

Another beautiful, well written piece ;] xx

Oh this one, it's simply beautiful poem you potray here.....beautiful emotion penned, awesome! "I have heard of Romeo and Juliet, How their love survived the test of time, I have heard Shakespeare in love, How true love was demystified."

Awwww...... i luv ur poems....keep on writing!

I like it ... you are quite talented, well anyways... 5/5