Deanna,

i really like this poem...it is so blunt and honest. and i think it flows good. it is a sad poem, but i think sometimes the sad ones have soo much heart.

chelsea

Oh my god your poem is great!!! even though i don't know how it feels to turn to cocaine but i can totally relate to this poem! You're a natural! keep it up!! and by the way thanks for leaving me all the comments and for carring so much I truly appreciate it!

Wow. i love your rhymeing, and the way it you dont force the rhyme. touching poem. thanks for all the nice comments.

Omg. wow.
Im so speachless.
Beautiful.
I could never compete with you.
Your so amazing. i love your poems.
Thanks again.:)

5/5
Amberinaa*
Muchlovee.

This is truly a sad poem in that it is so true. Another amazing write, excellent flow. 5/5

ricky black

Sorry i haven't commented on your poems in along time lot's of stuff has happened.....anyways i love this poem it reminds me of two very dear friends that have picked that kind of a path your poems are full of sadness yet you fill them with some sort of over bearing love that i can't explain wonderful job
auna:)

Hi Deana,

I really enjoy reading your poetry. I can tell you write from experience and with your heart. I look forward to reading more.

Connie

P.S. I admire the work you do with these troubled youth.

I'm a lost soul, no where to go. 5/5 anyways :D

Wow..very inspirational. 5/5