Brittni --
You did a pretty good job on this one, but it still landed a 4 on my scale. The theme was very vague ;; I really couldn`t grasp the intent of the poem, which really confuses the reader. The flow really didn`t work out -- some of your lines are too long, and, some of them too short. I would consider revising this. I would also suggest re-reading through a couple of your poems, and evaluating them yourself. Then, you`ll know exactly what you`re missing, which allows for easier fixing. Nice job, 4/5.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood