Anger screams so loudly
Agianst this endless yelling
On and on it goes
Never stoping to question
Fear returns than stops
No hope to this endless horror
The protests never heard
Wishing
Never stopping
Never pausing for a moment
Brittni --
I gave this poem a 5/5. The flow didn`t seem forced at all, and I didn`t pick up any grammar or spelling errors. You did a better job on this. Again, I`m going to suggest writing a rhyming poem. If you do, let me know, and I`ll read it. Nice job, 5/5.