You

by *Sweet as your worst nightmare*   Jul 29, 2006


Everyday i looked forward to seeing you
Telling you the stories
What had happened what hadnt
Finally it happened
You told me you didnt want me
That i wasnt good enough
Maybe not for you
Maybe not for me
But someday i will
Just not today

Brittni Leiker

Copyright ©2006 Brittni Nicole Leiker

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The hope of change is very inspiring in this poem. it is virtuous not only to hope but to believe that you can take any steps toward love

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Brittni --
    Hey! I had to give this poem a 4/5 for a couple of reasons. First of all, the grammar. That is something I check for immediately on almost all poems, especially people who don`t have a lot of comments yet. You need to make sure that you`re capitalizing your 'I'`s, and that you`re using correct puncuation where necessary. The flow was really unsteady and sort of forced. You did an alright job on this, but there is definitely room for improvement. 4/5.

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

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