Though it was a little rough in some places...i liked what it was about...you expressed you emotions so well...i felt i could feel your pain...your hate...excellent job writing down what you were feeling...and isn't that the important thing about poems anyway? that they are a reflection of you heart...your soul...you pain...or love? something like that? therefore...i will give you a 5...your poem really spoke to me...i loved it.

This poem didnt have much flow to it but it still touched my soul with the theme behind it. feel i can kinda relate to it. so good work