Your looked so innocent,

[You]

down the hall.
I let you go,
tears are falling-

[Broke rhyme here]

A spek in the distance,

[speck]

Now, I liked this poem since I can feel how much you like this boy.. Or that's what I got from it... But it was a bad poem; it was just a bit rocky.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

Since I know what this is all about. I understand where you are coming from, it brings out emotion, feelings. It's like breathing in a feeling, which if that made any sence, it is a good thing. :) -Shauni