by Nancy Jul 29, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
This poem was written for Gregory |
by Tormented
This was good but yeh i agree with jessy..you shud have explained yourself a bit more but otherwise it was great!! |
by Jessica
This was pretty good.. i didnt really understand it.. i think you should have added in more emotion and maybe explained yourself a little more.. nice job.. 3/5 p.s. it says in your profile that you are "male" and i am assuming that since you are a mom that is not true.. :) |
Yet again I think this should be called 'Silly Boy' and state its for Gregory at the top of the poem.. |