Yet again I think this should be called 'Silly Boy' and state its for Gregory at the top of the poem..

Yet another cute poem... You seem to be a wonderful mother if I can picture all this through your poems truly. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This was pretty good.. i didnt really understand it.. i think you should have added in more emotion and maybe explained yourself a little more.. nice job.. 3/5 p.s. it says in your profile that you are "male" and i am assuming that since you are a mom that is not true.. :)

This was good but yeh i agree with jessy..you shud have explained yourself a bit more but otherwise it was great!!
4/5!

Take Care

TORM