I Need To Cry

by Natalie   Jul 29, 2006


Recurring intoxicated visions,
venomous poisoned thoughts.
Unhealed wounds enrich pain,
stomach tied in double knots.

Crystallized tears do not shine,
fallen underneath weak eyelids.
Ancient doorways are padlocked,
escaping; evil demons do forbid.

Engraved memories stay carved,
beholding those unspoken secrets.
Covering untruthful fake beauty,
lost within these designed portraits.

Shedding layers of bright colors,
leading towards few false hopes.
Traveling down unseen roads,
climbing up high mountain slopes.

Surroundings are disappearing,
only revealing bitter friendships.
Untold story books closed shut,
locked behind these sealed lips.

..................I just need to cry.

July 29th 2006
Copyright © Natalie.

_There's a deeper meaning to this, If you're unsure and would like to know, just ask.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Wow this has a lot of emotion and great depth to it.. The ending would usually throw me off and I'd hate it, but it really brought the poem together. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Wonderful imagery, paints a beautiful picture in the mind. Great peice.

  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I don't normally like when a peom is crammed full of sescription, to avoid just telling the story, and yet, here you have written the deepest of thoughts, the most powerful of lines, one after another, provoking the reader to think, and to feel your pain, and your hurt.. whether it be because of a split, a death, the heartache of a disease, or a trauma, or an illness, it relates, and can be related to.. Therefore, this poem is amazing, and has the ability to anyone who feels the tightness of pian, and the need to let it go.. Very well done. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by toni rossetti

    I can relate to this poem, i loved it. it's hard to find the right words to express your inter feelings, words are powerful..
    SO WHAT IS THE MEANING BEHIND THIS POEM.
    TONIGHT

  • 18 years ago

    by Anne

    The words are very hard to understand i think. some of them are.

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