Wow, I loved this. It kinda relates to a situation for me, but in a totally different way... anyways, you've got a good style and I'd love to read more.

I loved the poem but there was something about the end i'm not sure i liked...i think it was the last line it din't seem to fit... but it's ok still very good poem i gave you a 5!!!

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Jenn

Aw, that sucks... the situation, obviously, not the poem. i hope things work out alright