Bad points: NONE!!!!!!!! Iloved it!

Good points: everything, i totally loved it!! it was like so good! n funny! :D i REALLY liked it!

Score i gave you: 5 Like i said there was not a single thing i could fault!!

Another great dark poem Nick, here is a little hint if you want those codes on your poem to go away. Most of the time if you type "He's or don't" stuff like that it will think you are miss spelling it, so go back into your poem and just rewrite the word and it will not make those codes again on that poem. o.o;