Bad points : it is VERY long, n kinda :o

Good points: I thought it flowed VERY well!!

Score i gave you:4 soz but i thought it was a bit :o!

Very nice. quite beautiful : D
love you emma. we need to find time to hang out more. Lol. love ya!!
-Snoo

Wow, Emah! This was great! I loved the 2nd last stanza! I'm sorry if all my comments are sounding the same, but I really can't find much wrong with your poetry, they're all great! Keep it up.

Natalie``

Wow amazing! Vey deep! I loved it and im very critical of poems on this site cause they are emo but urs was very very good and heartfelt 10 points!!