I really like this poem, its easy to get to the point of poem, what its all about.
I like how it feels like you put a lot of thought into it.
Keep up the good work

I really liked how this poem can relate to alot of poeple who lost someone to love.
Great job! Oh and one more thing....when you parents or any grown up yells at you 4 something you did,yes it is funny....until u get into more trouble! lol