This is a really cute poem, I love how you used fantasy in it. Fairies are my favourite mystical creatures so I really enjoyed this poem.
5/5

This was a very well considered poem, about the established child's favourite: the pixie ring. Although shouldn't the pixies be women? :p

Very nicely done, 5/5.

That is a very imagitative poem...I really like it ;)
great job 5/5

Awh, very cute. Great job. :]

You like writing funny poems don't you? Haha! I enjoy reading your work and seeing true talent. I couldn't understand some of your other poems so i commented on these. I'm not that advanced yet, I have alot to learn! :)