My self...........

by pinkey   Jul 29, 2006


Myself seems to be imaginary
but truth is in my heart...

myself seems to be speechless
but storms are in my heart....

my own self is like that bliss who always exists...
but eventhen missed...

myself seems to be colorless
but rainbow is in my heart...

myown self is like that thought
in the darkness who uses to float..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    Hey!
    Very nice poem
    I loved it so very much
    I read your profile..it says ur 4m Pakistan..well im 4m there as well...well i used to live there...but now im here...anyways great poem...great words...and i loved it!
    Btw thx 4 the comment...nd yeh i dd translate it...but thx...nd welcome to Poetic justice..im in there tooo...if ua need any help..post it on the disscusion board...Hope you like it there!!
    and wait to read more of your poems!!5/5

    Much love
    Tormented

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Very true poem
    Pretty good words
    Just a lil short
    make it longer so ppl can enjoy it
    Good job
    Congrats and Welcome to Poetic Justice
    hope you enjoy the club
    5/5
    ~MF~