Very true poem
Pretty good words
Just a lil short
make it longer so ppl can enjoy it
Good job
Congrats and Welcome to Poetic Justice
hope you enjoy the club
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~MF~

Hey!
Very nice poem
I loved it so very much
I read your profile..it says ur 4m Pakistan..well im 4m there as well...well i used to live there...but now im here...anyways great poem...great words...and i loved it!
Btw thx 4 the comment...nd yeh i dd translate it...but thx...nd welcome to Poetic justice..im in there tooo...if ua need any help..post it on the disscusion board...Hope you like it there!!
and wait to read more of your poems!!5/5

Much love
Tormented