Ooo, "absconding." i'm impressed : ) This is a really good poem

Blah blah blah...what all those other people already said! lol. J/K
You know I love this, I'm always impressed by your poetry.
I really like this part:

"Entrancing looks will not sever
Memories made by stars above"

"Torn passion's touch, our hearts unfold
intense seduction with a kiss"

Passionately written...Keep it up!
Love ya~Holly

This is good.I like the symbology and unique imagery.But it is the emotion that really shines through.Very eloquently and well expressed.

This brings tears to my eyes this is like so much feeling in it i cant explain it you nailed it right on the head 5/5 for sure
i think you should become a writer serious no joke!