I loved it 5/5 i no how it feels..hope u dont feel this way..xoxox loe georgia

Please dont remember that. Remeber the happy times Angie.

Luv Niquee
xoxoxoxox

Man what a great poem. Alot of emotion in this poem. Th imagry is great. I love the flow of the poem. Nothing i can really see that needs correction.

This poem is extremely good too. I agree that the imagery and emotion are both very strong. It's just very descriptive.. i like it...

If this is really going on though. I hope things get better for you .. I know how it is.. I've been there.. I'm still there. It's an ongoing struggle, so I hope if you ever want to talk just let me know..

Ariana

Hey great poem, i know how u feel, if u eva need 2 talk u can email me.
love mel

Nicee! 5/5 I like this one too.. its soo sad! =(Depressing..but its very good! XoX Chelss