I really liked this poem, it had an interesting rhyme scheme and it told a lot about you. You're right, people change into what they feel and I do know how you feel. I thought this was a good poem. 5/5.

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I love your poems they are really good, and if u ever wanna talk, i'm just an e-mail away.. ur a really good writer,, i hope u know that

Great poem! I like how you added in the "emo" and "goth" labels that everyone tries to pin on anyone wears black...and how you defended yourself against them. thank you for commenting on my poem, it means a lot to me!
~Asha

Great poem. i like it a lot. i hate it when people think i changed into some depressed freak on purpose. but like you said, change happens wether you like it or not.

thanks for the comment

So true. im sure tons can relate, as can i. the labeling people chose to do pisses me off, and its just plain wrong to judge someone by clothing. anyways, very good poem. good emotion, i think you could have elaborated a bit more tho, but all in all, excellent.

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I really liked it. i h8 it when my friends change and become some one they arnt..but it happens...thanks for the commment..it did make sence..xoxoxo love georgia

Very true. i think alot of people will agree with wat ur saying. people do grow up and change but mayb it's for the better. i think u'r a lovely person (even though i haven't met u. i would love to one day though) keep up the good writting. i'll always read.
love ya
Willow xxoo