*nods* yes.. there is unresolved feeling there.. and you put it across in you poetry.. i can tell.. great job.. and sometimes.. it would be nice to have some one to talk to... thanx..

Good poem---The flow is great and the emotions in it are clearly expressed--The one thing that I didn't love about this poem is the rhyme-I think it is a little overdone and plain, but thats just my opinion---Overall, good write--5/5

I totaly know what your talking about! i can totally feel the emotion in this one! if you ever need to talk you can email me!!
Amanda

I know exactly what you're talking about, I can relate %100. Your poem was a beautiful expression of feeling and I hope you keep writing, 1. cuz you have talent and 2. it gets those feelings out. If you ever want someone to talk to feel free to email me anytime. I'll be praying for you, you seem like a great person, you'll get through this :).

This is souch a great poem they all are...you have such tarrifice writing skills..you can express your pain so will...thanks for the comment..im sorry you feel like this i feel similar but i always got a friend 2 e-mail when im @ my worst...if you ever wanna e-mail me go ahead..i promised my friend 3 week with out cutting wow iv done 1 day and its so hard...anyway..xooxoxo lots of love

This is such an awesome poem.
You are really good at writing poems.
Keep it up.
=D
5\5
Kaytie xxxx

Oh thats sad. i hope that day never comes. ur really good at writting. keep it up. if u ever want to talk email me. i'm a good listener. adn i will reply with wat i think of wats happend. keep up the writting.
love ya
Willow xxoo

I love this.. I know how you feel...
also if u ever want to talk just e-mail me... i always have time ..
keep writing! your great at it

I know that feeling. I can relate to this quite a lot too. its a great poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work.
Thanks for the comment on mine.