Can't

by sweet surrender   Jul 29, 2006


My life's going to hell,
Can you not tell.

I don't want to hide,
I hurt like crazy inside.

Everything is falling apart,
I will soon have no heart.

Can't anyone see?
I'm falling down to my knees.

I wish everyone can feel my pain,
pretty soon I'll go insane!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    I kno exactly how u feel. i can relaly relate to this poem. i love it.. its so good. u wrote this so well. its short but gets to the point. i like how it flows together and how it rhymes perfectly... keep on writing great job
    take care
    angie

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