Suicide, Suicide

by SilenceBreaksTheHeart   Jul 29, 2006


Suicide, Suicide calling your name.
Suicide, Suicide an end to all shame.
You gamble your life
with a slice of a knife.

Suicide, Suicide an end to your fight.
Suicide, Suicide will make it alright.
Now tighten the noose
to end the abuse.

Suicide, Suicide the infinite pain.
Suicide, Suicide they'll think your insane.
Raise the gun
and death has won.

Suicide, Suicide an end to all good.
Suicide, Suicide so misunderstood.
There'll be no more joy
for this sweet little boy.

Suicide, Suicide it's not the right choice.
Suicide, Suicide please hear my voice.
Hold on to every precious breath,
do not cause your own death.

***I felt like suicide was an appropriate topic to write about right now. It seems like a lot of people are so depressed lately and want to die...but it is never the right way to go.
I think the second part of every stanza needs work so please leave comments and tell me what you think. Thanks. : D

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  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    I like this poem of yours. thankz for the comments.

    ADRIAN ('',)

  • 18 years ago

    by Alaynna

    I AM A DEPRESSED PERSON AND I HAVE THOUGHT ABOUT IT ALOT, AND I HAVE TRID IT.BUT I AM SO GLAD THAT I AM STILL HERE...

  • 18 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    I think it doesn't matter when it is, there will always be a lot of depressed people. But in a year or so it will all go away from them, some will start new lives and move on. It is sad how some people can just end their lives when there is someone who has it so much worse then them and actually wants to live. Anyway, great poem. I really like it a lot.

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