by Nadan Jul 29, 2006
category :
Fun, humor /
other
Once upon a time, |
Lol loved the ending.. and the lil dog meowed! you have a great sence of humour and this was really fun to read!... check the third stanza.... you wrote tried instead of tired! lol other than that it was great.. keep writting.. please read and comment on some of my poems, thanks kirsty palmer xx |