by Samantha Hollywood Jul 29, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
We`re two of many people |
by Jyoti Rawat
Nice Job |
by Candice
Awww this poem is so sweet! It makes me have fuzzies all over! lol. You did very well on your rhyming and I liked the flow. It really shows what love in one is all about. 5/5 Great job! :) |
by Biscuit
The flow to this is not very strong, some of the lines have too many syllables. nice rhyming tho and i like the language. u are very talented, adn u haev an individual style. |
by Nelle
Awwww I can really relate to this one, alot! It was great you wrote it beautifully, the flow and rhythm was perfect...you did a great great job on it babe! 5/5 |
by Dana
Very lovely dovey, not my cup of tea. Sorry I'm rather bitter lol But it seemed to flow well and if I liked love poems, I'm sure I'd love this one. So here's a 5/5! great work! |