Great poem,
too great for me to be able to write some about it. and I totally agree with it.

Aww very cute.. I loved it.. This is how i feel so I can relate so well. Great job describing it.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

5/5

Great! I loved it. Its kinda hard to explain what I want to say but Ill say this I really loved this poem!

Aww! This was sooo cuuuute. Tehe. Loved the ending. Very warming and heartfelt, hun. Rhyming was good aswell. A great love poem. =P Keep it up!! 5/5

Natalie``

Very lovely dovey, not my cup of tea. Sorry I'm rather bitter lol But it seemed to flow well and if I liked love poems, I'm sure I'd love this one. So here's a 5/5! great work!

Awwww I can really relate to this one, alot! It was great you wrote it beautifully, the flow and rhythm was perfect...you did a great great job on it babe! 5/5

The flow to this is not very strong, some of the lines have too many syllables. nice rhyming tho and i like the language. u are very talented, adn u haev an individual style.

-biscuit-

Awww this poem is so sweet! It makes me have fuzzies all over! lol. You did very well on your rhyming and I liked the flow. It really shows what love in one is all about. 5/5 Great job! :)

Nice Job