Confessions (From Myself)

by Samantha Hollywood   Jul 29, 2006


** BEFORE YOU READ THiS **
I`m thinking about writing a novel in my spare time. This is somewhat how the novel would start ;; and I just want some critique on it, and please let me know if it sounds interesting, and if you`d read it. Thanks!

I guess my life really began when I was in sixth grade. I started experimenting with things I shouldn`t have, and singled myself out from the crowd. Is it possible to be popular, but not want it?
I began seventh grade, and realized I was three completely different people. The popular one, who was fun to be around. A cheerleader ;; drank from sippy cups just because no one else did.
Then, The smart side. I began Jr High (seventh grade) with college level reading, writing, spelling, and grammar skills. I had (well, have) a 152 I.Q., and am involved in things such as band and debating.
Finally, there was the bad side. The side that cut, did bad things. The side that needed help.
So you ask ;;
"What happens when you try to be all three?"

Well....

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

    PS. Plz rate and comment on some of my poems and I'll return the favour.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ruby

    Hey,
    WOW! Nice. You need more description in the beginning, but it is nice. the beginning was kind of boring but once you were ending it, it got my attention and i wanted to read more. Work on the beginning and i can't wait to see the book.
    TAKE CARE! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    !!! that poem was very nice and I enjoyed reading it
    Its poems like these that make me happy I happened to come upon them
    Great job and keep writing porfavor (please, haha)

    If you could please read/rate my poem Classic Love Song, I appreciate it
    I return the favor if you comment back

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissey

    Not bad if I don't say so myself...just have one suggestion, you used "I bagan seventh grade" twice..perhaps you could change the second one into "I entered seventh grade"? Up to you hun....got my attention for sure! I appreciate your comment on our poem we like honest feedback!!! Keep writing this was good!! I'm already on my second novel and have a co-author!! Keep your faith and you'll go far
    -Krissey
    (Kristy and Chelsey from CCP)

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thanks for the comment on my poem! means alot to me!

    your novel would start out good! keep it up 5/5

    even if you wanna r/r/c my poem for free i would r/r/c on ur at least 1 lol :D
    thanks a bunch

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