Thanks for the comment on my poem! means alot to me!

your novel would start out good! keep it up 5/5

even if you wanna r/r/c my poem for free i would r/r/c on ur at least 1 lol :D
thanks a bunch

Not bad if I don't say so myself...just have one suggestion, you used "I bagan seventh grade" twice..perhaps you could change the second one into "I entered seventh grade"? Up to you hun....got my attention for sure! I appreciate your comment on our poem we like honest feedback!!! Keep writing this was good!! I'm already on my second novel and have a co-author!! Keep your faith and you'll go far
-Krissey
(Kristy and Chelsey from CCP)

!!! that poem was very nice and I enjoyed reading it
Its poems like these that make me happy I happened to come upon them
Great job and keep writing porfavor (please, haha)

If you could please read/rate my poem Classic Love Song, I appreciate it
I return the favor if you comment back

Hey,
WOW! Nice. You need more description in the beginning, but it is nice. the beginning was kind of boring but once you were ending it, it got my attention and i wanted to read more. Work on the beginning and i can't wait to see the book.
TAKE CARE! :)

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

PS. Plz rate and comment on some of my poems and I'll return the favour.