Comments : Growing up

  • 18 years ago

    by Dana

    This is quite the intense emotional poem m'dear. It flowed rather well! The rhyme scheme seemed a little forced, but it was still great! 5/5 from me!

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Guess you said it all really. Wise words from one so young. Nice flow and rhyme.