Comments : Talent show Day

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Can relate to that. If yur singing is as good as your poems you must have done ok. Loved the vocab to describe stage fright.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Jaime Lea --
    The grammar in this poem wasn`t as great as the other one, so, I had to give it a 4. The flow and the rhyming seemed really forced ;; loosen it up a bit. Overall, I think you did a good job on this poem, but, there is definitely room for improvement.
    No need to return the favor ;; these are free comments.

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood