I love da poem, 4rm da title i thought it wos gna be a different kind ov poem so I wos surprised wen I actually read it. I lyk da fact dat it deals with the psychological effects of war rather than the obvious destruction death etc. and moral message poems on the subject of war.
I also really liked da fact dat its uncertain for me whether its a victim of war as in a civillian or a soldier dealing with the after effects cos if you read it from both perspectives the poem takes on different meanings, I think this is one of my favourite ov ur recent poens, without a doubt.
Lots and lots and lots of Love,
Beth xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx