Sensesfail --
^^ Lol, sorry, don`t feel like typing it out exactly. Anyway..
I think that overall, you did an alright job. I liked the theme, but the flow, rhyming, grammar, and spelling wasn`t so great. That`s why I docked you. Keep this up, though, you`re on the right track. Just consider re-reading your poems a couple of times and making sure that they make complete sense before you post them.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

This is a cute free verse. I especially liked the ending. Nice job!