by Ye Seul Jul 30, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
It was sweet when you gave kisses to me |
by Jessica
Awhhh, that was sooo sadd.. The flow was good and the descriptions were beautiful.. The emotion was loud and clear and was oozing from every line.. I liked how after every stanza you said I will miss that alot.. It really added effect to the poem.. Awhh, wonderful work sweetie.. 5/5 |
by *Isolde*
Awww that is such a sad poem. very good . 5/5 |